D'vorahDavida
Yetzirah

But Is He Worth CRYING Over?
Fri Nov 21 2003

I am having an emotional day today. It’s cloudy out and chilly and I have turned on the fireplace to toast my….toes near it once in a while.
I also had an emotional encounter with my main character. I decided after all to dictate today, as I don’t have to look closely at the computer screen at all times. So I wrote my character into his crisis and up to a certain epiphany that he had to come to, or the story couldn’t go on.
I found myself sitting there with my headset on, with tears dripping onto my lap as I told the story. I could hardly believe it. Is this normal?

But on to other things. The following is an experiment at Billy Teabag’s request. Here is a paragraph written by Garrison Keillor in answer to a question from a listener of “A Prairie Home Companion” on whether she owned too many books and journals.

Following it, will be the same paragraph dictated into Dragon Naturally Speaking with no corrections to see how accurate it is. (At least how accurate with me dictating!)

Okay, Garrison Keillor:

What to do? Well, don't strain your back, my dear. A person can handle only so much luggage. If you love to buy books, then you should also learn to love to give away books. But if you are actually using the pens to write on the paper, then buying them isn't a fetish. It's simply the sensible pleasure of writing, including the sensuous feel of a lovely pen in the hand and the point against the paper. A person can take a lifetime of pleasure in this. You pick up a sheet of handsome paper and your favorite pen and pick up a book to use for a writing desk and hold it on your knees and proceed to improve the page with a few paragraphs and thus you leave your mark. A noble enterprise, nothing to be sheepish about.


Garrison Keillor according to Dragon Naturally Speaking :

What to do? Well, don't strain your back my dear a person can handle only so much luggage. If you love to buy books, then you should also learned to love to give away books. But if you're actually using the hands to write on the paper, then buying them isn't a finish. It's simply the sensible pleasure of writing, including the sensuous feel of a lovely pan in the hand and the point against the paper. A person can take a lifetime of pleasure in his. You pick up a sheet of hand some paper and your favorite pan and pick up a book to use for a writing desk and hold it on your needs and proceed to improve to pay each with a view paragraphs and the best you leave your mark. A noble enterprise, nothing to be sheet dish about.


Not exactly word perfect. However. When you have just had enough typing for the day, or your eyes are tired it’s not such a bad tool to have in your computer toolbox. And it is possible that someone else would have better enunciation than myself and thus get better results.

Anyway, there you have it. Straight from the mouth of the Dragon…..

P.S. I rather love to see the last sentence of his answer is underlined with green grammar gremlin lines, as MS Word is scolding that it considers that line a sentence fragment, or some other grammar faux pas. I use them all the time. Glad to know I am in good company.



9 Comments
  • From:
    Energy (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Nov 20 2003
    I love "A Prairie Home Companion"!
  • From:
    Sezrah (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Nov 20 2003
    oh no, poor guy!!!!!!!
    i'm hanging out that things work out alright for him, and i really mean that (am *i* crazy??)

    sez
  • From:
    AeolianSolo (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Nov 20 2003
    I, too, have shed actual tears over the poignant plight of a character or two. You are not that weird. Sometimes my characters are more real to me than most of the people I know.
    --Solo
  • From:
    Bookworm (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Nov 20 2003
    Oh yes, that is completely normal. Sounds like you're having a blast writing this novel. Great stuff. ;-)
  • From:
    RealmOfRachel (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Nov 20 2003
    I think it's normal to form an attachment to your main character, having not written anything worthwhile in recent months I find it hard to cry over any of them. Perhaps the emotional outburst is a sign that your writing something powerful that touches a nerve, or then again it could be a sign that therapy with Rubber Duckie is needed?

  • From:
    Pragmatist (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Nov 21 2003
    Well, I suppose the dragon is OK. Wonder what it would look like after my midwestern (some people say) accent. I don't think I have an accent. I think I speak perfectly pure American English. Don't I?

    Well, at least you can go back and edit after you've rested your eyes. How many words now?

    Shalom
  • From:
    BillyTeabags (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Nov 21 2003
    It's weird a person can become emotionally involved with a made up character like that. Although it's probably a good thing it happens, as your reactions probably make for more powerful writing.

    That Dragon thingy is pretty accurate. And the mistakes it made were just enough to give the paragraph a hint of surreality. (I especially enjoyed the last sentence.) Where did you get that program?



  • From:
    AQuietEvening (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Nov 21 2003
    I would much rather have a pen in my hand than a pan!

    ~QE
  • From:
    Parett (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Nov 21 2003
    Knowing you, I'm not a bit surprised by the tears. I think you cry when you hang out the laundry. And yes, I also think you are reacting to the emotional situation your character is involved in. You are just a very sensitive spirit. I love very sensitive spitirs.(I lft this in without correction just so ou could see I'm worse than Dragon...)Maybe Dragon has funny neurons, too!

    Take care and God bless. ME