D'vorahDavida
Yetzirah

Monday Monday
Tue Aug 03 2004


At least it's Monday here, on my half of the world.

I wound the grandfather clock this morning, because it had stopped. I checked for the correct time on the internet, and there was a map there that showed where it was light and where it was nighttime all over the world. At noon here, the sun was about to go down in England and about to come up in Australia. What a merry-go-round we are all on together!

Somehow, dirty dishes have multiplied on my kitchen counter, newspapers have sprouted like mushrooms on the floors and scribbled in journals lie scattered here and there near every contemplative zone in my house. Weekend detritus. I must clear this stuff up, else how else will I begin this week?

I'm slowly making out a grocery list, getting ready for an errand blitzkrieg tomorrow.
The details mount up so quickly in modern life. I've seen what happens when you let them get the better of you. Soon there is no place to think a clear thought. And I feel the need most urgently these days to think clear thoughts.

I am about to launch into more re-writing on my novel. I have it on good authority from a very trusted reader, whom I swore to brutal honesty, that I should continue with the work. I came to the place with it, that I could not see the forest for the trees. I didn't know if it stank or not. But being assured that it doesn't completely stink, I now am obligated to get busy. (Okay, is THAT the right place to use whom, Oh wise and wonderful Pragmatist?) . . . Will I EVER get it right? Or will I continue to humiliate myself displaying my shaky spelling and grammar?

I think I'm hanging out in the Gloomy Place. Was it Eeyore who lived there? I'm trying to be thankful and full of optimism, but for some reason today, the hormones pull in the other direction. They can't hold out forever though. I have figured that much out.

After all, there are 99 other acres in the 100 Acre Wood. They can't ALL be gloomy now can they?



8 Comments
  • From:
    Pragmatist (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    Yes, "whom" is correctly used. I really think we could do without the who-whom, and maybe eventually the purists will recognize that it really doesn't make that much difference.

    I think you'll be proud of yourself when I give you back your first chapter. And I'm eager to get the next one. Your premise fascinates me! The arguments prosed by your anti-hero are quite cogent, and, I think, personal.

    Shalom

    Shalom
  • From:
    Ichandra (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    hi mon amie wow those arab men could dance in their finest silks this afternoon and they mesmerized me with their darkest romantic looks the men are so proud i wouldnt want to be a girl in their society
    i ate and ate crepes in the french tent strawherry ones yum cetait magnifique
    i bought a wallet from the phillipines tent they kept bartering 50 dollars 4o 30 i got it for twenty
    it was fun im so used to just scan the bar code i went feeling so f*cking miserable and i came out of it beautifully even though i went alone i rose
    grammar gets tricky to me when i think about it it gets hard hee hee when i dont think it is easy and i find spelling the same way
    and punctuation well i like to just leave it out altogether it is not even worth thinking about
    a la prochaine mon amie
    madeleine nice french name wouldnt you say


  • From:
    ImNotLisa (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    I think I must be in there with you, somewhere, these last few days. Look for the light through the trees, you'll find your way out.
  • From:
    InStitches (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    Yes, Eeyore is the gloomy one; a true pesimist if ever there was one. Yet it was Eeyore who most appreciated little acts of kindness and was the first to noticed moments of beauty. There are 100 acres to explore. Perhaps you need a visit to the creek to dangle your toes in the water or to sit on a hill side and watch a beautiful sunset. It works for Eeyore everytime. :)
  • From:
    Bookworm (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    Bravo and big cheers from over here. I'm extremely happy to read this news. Go for it. ;-)
  • From:
    Fairywishes (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    I often think of my DD friends who are at different times of the day to me.

    I feel the same about having space to think clear thoughts. It seems that if my house gets overloaded with cr*p so does my brain. That is actually quite a good excuse ;-)
    x
  • From:
    Supertrooper (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    Chin up my friend ..there is always sunshine after the rain .
    Heres a big hug
    Linda xx
    ((((((((())))))))))))
  • From:
    Becoming (Legacy)
    On:
    Tue Aug 03 2004
    *laughing hysterically* . . . plumber's work can be draining . . . hehehehehe