D'vorahDavida
Yetzirah

Name That Planet
Fri Feb 13 2004

Hub man, the man at the Hub, my main squeeze is home sick again today. We finally hauled him off to the doctor where he was declared to be a victim of bronchitis and given antibiotics. He is now demanding 7 Up, Hot Buttered Rum mix and Shredded Wheat. I wonder if he was misdiagnosed? Sounds like he might be pregnant.

Me, I went along to the doctor and sat in the waiting room with my scribble book desperately trying to figure out what to name the planet in my novel. It seems a simple thing really, but I am at a complete standstill and have convinced myself not to go forward until I can give a name to this place. I think it might help me understand it better and describe it more accurately.

As I say, it seems a simple thing, and as I mentioned once before, even God had to enlist the help of Adam when it came to naming the creatures He had just finished making. I have three notebook pages jam packed with names I have compiled over the last several weeks. None of them seems right. I have recently taken to writing down word endings…. ing, ite, ers, une, ure, ia, lin, ain, ise, ness, and so forth and so on as possible endings to draw from while making up some name.

I listed the names of our own planets in this solar system, noted that they are all Greeky Romany Latiny names, except Earth. I don’t know what it means. I looked it up in the BIG dictionary and it comes from Old English, but it does not give a meaning. I always thought it was such a lovely name, Earth. Soft, feminine. Mother Earth. I was especially taken with the pronunciation guide in the dictionary.. “ rth ”. I loved that. I come from the planet ….. rth ……

While sitting in the waiting room, bent over my notebook, I became aware of a young woman who sat down near me and immediately got on her cell phone and ordered a salad from a local restaurant. “I would like a Spinach salad with butter lettuce. Yes, in 15 minutes. And I want double dill dressing. No sprouts. Yes, the Spinach salad with no spinach. Butter lettuce. I know it’s kind of funny, but I order it like that all the time. Thank you.”

I’m thinking, Spinach Salad with no spinach. Okee dokee. You got it. You’re the boss.

Click, phone got stowed in chic little black purse. Her name was called. She was pencil thin, dressed all in black, streaky blond hair pulled back into a pony tail. The nurse mentioned that since she is going on a trip, they would make sure she has her medication ready to take with her, as they disappear into the bowels of the inner office.

For some reason, I would not like to be around when things don’t go just as planned for this young woman. It might get ugly REAL fast.

But there I was left sitting in my ill fitting navy blue pants that I have owned for 7 or 8 years that ride up when I am sitting and show a portion of bare leg above my teal green socks that have seen better days, scratching my head while leafing back and forth through my notebook considering and rejecting name after name for my planet.

Spinach salad with no spinach…… good god.
I wonder what SHE would call HER alien planet?
“Let’s call it Sproutlia. With no sprouts. And don’t argue with me either!”

An elderly gentleman sat down and said a few friendly words and we laughed. It ran through my mind to ask him what he would name an alien planet. But I didn’t want to reveal that I am writing a book. It seemed so pretentious a thing to say to a stranger. But this is how far out on a limb I feel about the whole business. I am ready to ask complete strangers obscure questions in doctor’s waiting rooms.

And don’t tell me to leave it blank and come back to it later. I HAVE left it blank for months and this IS the dreaded, mythical, later ! I may have made a grave mistake. That nice old gentleman might have known the name and I was just too chicken to ask him. I now have to live with the fact that I may have let a COSMIC EVENT slip through my fingers by being such an introvert.
Do ALL introverts miss their cosmic events? Now I’m depressed.

And I STILL don’t have a name for my planet!!!

When we got home, I made the error of mentioning to Hub man what I was working on, and he immediately said to call it “Melmac”…. Which I think comes from some TV show. I informed him that I was NOT writing a Douglas Adams novel, and shouldn’t he be lying down on the couch and keeping quiet or something?

No wonder it took Tolkien 15 years to write Lord of the Rings. I bet he spent the first 2 deciding on the name “Frodo”. Which frankly is not that inspiring a name. But Samwise Gamgee, now THERE is a name for you.

That name is a stroke of genius.

Long silent pause . . . Maybe he got that name from a wise old man who lived in the belfry at the college where he worked. The same old wise man who never came out of the belfry except for midnight mass on Christmas Eve, and wrote esoteric texts on middle English prose from crumbling parchment manuscripts that he had stolen from a castle in the wilds of Scotland when he was a lad of 13.

Ya think?

You know what?

I’ll bet Tolkien got it out of the phone book.



11 Comments
  • From:
    Sezrah (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Feb 12 2004
    im always intrigued how writers come up with believable names for planets and people and even species in their sci-fi books
    wishing you all the best!

    sez
  • From:
    Sashibeak (Legacy)
    On:
    Thu Feb 12 2004
    Gosh, now there's a thought! How DID Tolkein come up with all those names? And J.K.Rowling too! Oh, to have such a wonderful imagination. I would love to be able to instantly spew forth a great, perfect name for your planet.......... but unfortunately I'm not that talented. Shall think on it though!

    With regards to your hubby's coming down with the "Lurg"....... I'm a student nurse and very into holistic healing. I have recently cured my bloke of the wretched snuffles by giving him Fenugreek (for congestion), Olive Leaf Extract (a natural antibiotic), and Wild Cherry drops (for his cough). He was finding the OTC crap was drying him out and making him feel miserable. He tried the herbal stuff and VOILA! He is rapidly cured!

    You should find any of this stuff at your local herb shop. Hope he feels better soon.

    I rather like Sproutlia.............. he he he!!

    Hugz,

    Sash ~^~
  • From:
    Calichef (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    Allright!!! Two for the price of one! I always love those buy one get one free sales. :-D

    I agree with you, naming characters and places is the hardest part of writing. I agree living on *rth* is a nice planet name. Maybe a Hebrew name that wouldn't be recognized (necessarily) as Hebrew? Or an Aramiaic name. You might find some interesting sounding names for your planet there.
    ~Cali
  • From:
    AeolianSolo (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    Tolkien had the benefit of being British. They have the funniest place-names in the world. A long time ago I named my own Hobbit, Toadflax Midgen-Buttonwillow. Sounds just as good as any of the Professor's.

    As far as planet-naming; I've never had a problem naming my fictional places. I base them off the native language of the people I'm writing about. My medieval world has different names depending upon which country you're in at the time.

    If you have a feel for the native language of your people, just start making up words in the sounds of their dialect; eventually you'll hit on a combination of syllables which will seem perfect. In essence, you let your characters name their home. Works much better that way.

    --Solo
  • From:
    Yarngirl (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    Gosh I'm terrible at coming up with names. I tend to like thing or people names too much to be original.

    You could always name it after Andy Rooney's eyebrows - some weird twisted sort of tribute.
    No? Didn't think so. ;o)

    Julie
  • From:
    Yarngirl (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    :o) But it made you think, didn't it? LOL

    Julie
  • From:
    RealmOfRachel (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    I adore you, I'm bookmarking this entry on my favourites to cheer me up in the long dark days ahead. Your right about Tolkien although I suspect he chickened out and cribbed quite a bit from lots of old musty Norse derivative texts.

    The description of the Yuppie Sprout Beast made me laugh quite heartily. I'm tempted to suggest you name it planet Bob, but that's probably not supportive. If I think of anything I shall let you know.

    Rach xx
  • From:
    Dustbunny3 (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    How about Cassiopea a singing place in the sky from Carl Sagan Contact. Oh how I miss his series
    to take us to The ( Cosmos).
    Dustbunny3
  • From:
    Energy (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    I like Sproutlia.

    Or maybe make it out of an acronym that only you know. Like Pwoan for "Planet with out a name". Or Immce for "I missed my cosmic event". Or Carnan for "considering and rejecting name after name"
  • From:
    Bookworm (Legacy)
    On:
    Fri Feb 13 2004
    Thoroughly entertaining entry. It makes me think of a silly film I saw once with Richard Dreyfus(?) and he'd been given some grant to find this lost tribe. Of course, he hadn't found this tribe and resorted to making them up. He named the lost tribe after his three children, I think they were called the *shelmickymoo* tribe. Can't recall the name of the film... but it's an idea. ;-)
  • From:
    Salamander (Legacy)
    On:
    Mon Feb 16 2004
    Think of a handful of words that describe your planet, then go grab a latin dictionary. Latin, according to C.J. Cherryh, is an alien language, and I wouldn't care to argue with one of the best writers of sf out there today. Anyhow, plug away at the Latin dictionary until you find something that sounds good, then fix the spelling up to please yourself.